The break's not so bad..
I like the little vinyl scratch thing... thats cool. The balance is perfect and so is everything I think.. quality top notch. The only thing I am going to say which is that you should try not to make your songs so awesome cos I was deafened by awesomeness. The beat at around 3:00 is the only bad thing and you could do with a second variation of the meldoy but only a minor change and maybe a change in key at the end or something but I wouldn't change alot if anything at all!
-Dreadnought106