Noice work
A bit more EQ work wudnt go a miss. Also the delay on that intrument from 1:18 onwards was too much- a little annoying is the only thing that comes to mind. The piano that comes after was a nice touch though- good thinking :P The seemingly randomnly placed kicks kinda ruin it- I can see there was some kind of plan there- but it didnt reli work. The "rave" part is awesome I will say. loved that part. Also the start wasnt that bad either. Lots of bass if a little badly placed :P
Noice work anyhow :)
-Dreadnought106